All Comments on 'Mark's Family Ch. 01'

the story was good up til the point where you gave him a 15" cock that kind of ruined it make it realistic leave the monster cocks and tits out or put the story in the fantasy area

I got to the part with the 15 " dick and stopped there - why is it that all the teenie weenie short dick writers always overcompensate and give their characters what they don't have themselves?

Sorry, but I coould not finish

your story. I sttarted laughing

at the 15 inch cock. And my eyes

teared up so bad I had to quit.

Sorry...

Most people stopped at the 15 inch cock part. WHAT THE FUCK??? I, personally, am a fan of huge dicks. I've only read chapter one and cum seven times! I'll read chapter two either later tonight, or tomorrow. You see, it's hard for me to find stories I like, so when I DO find one, I spread it out for more pleasure.

BTW, I'm not a member, but you can call me SexyVixen.

Keep up the good work, big cock or not!

Loved the story but 15 1/2 inches and larger round than a can of coke, ridiculous.

...freak shows, and I find it more amusing than anything else. This was pretty hot though...Interesting...

then the 15 inch dick comes into play, if you gotta pick a Dick size make it somewhat believable. Rest of the story predictable but ok.

The 15 1/2" cock was one thing but this, " I moaned as her mouth slid over the head" of a cock wider than a coke can...took the cake. Too much.

I have never heard of a 15 inch cock so that to me is hard to believe. If it was around 10/12 inches then I could believe.

The rest of the story was good but not brilliant.

Not even peeking over the reality-horizon, complete rubbish, don't bother taking this any further, it can't get any worse, athough I bet you're willing to give it a try...

I stopped reading your story as soon as you said you were 15 1/2" and wider than a coke can. Your story may be great but you lost me as a reader with that so I will never know if is good or not. Based on the unrealistic size though I'm pretty sure the rest of the story is also, so nothing missed!

As soon as fifteen and a half was mentioned any erotic vibes were easily thrown out the window. Some common sense is needed when writing stories. Please get some realistic writing skills.

Love it don't stop buy the end had my cuck hard and in hand

15 inch! .. Do you know how big is that ...dude some common sense please ....!!!!!!@#<<

I have a friend that I sext that is that big and I want to fuck him sooo bad! I loved your story and would definitely love to read more!

the largest human penis on record is 13 1/2 inches. do some research before you write.

5 for research!!!!

WHO CARE ABOUT THE EXACT MEASUREMENTS - IT IS THE TURN ON THAT MATTERS - OTHER WISE YOU WOULD NOT BE READING THIS. :-)

I stopped reading when the writer claimed to have a 15 1/2 cock with the girth of a coke can. What could have been a good story ended right there for me.

i agree that 15" cock is complete fantasy, tho im hot for big cocks and it isnt that really bad, but only if you actually adjust the story with the size of it. deepthroating 15 and the grith of cola can is complete dillusional and fantasy(which this story doesnt tag for)unless you want to rip the girls jaw and thats where i stopped. pushing 13" into a woman and especially 18-19y old is an achievement for the chick if shes a slut, which here its not surprising she is. pretty mediocre for an ero. 3/5 at best

I really like this type of story keep it coming

15 inch dick? are you fucking retarded? 1/5

Not a huge fan of the "innocent" baby sister going super slut in the hopes of impressing her brother angle. Otherwise, good read.

As far as the cock size goes, I'm fine with suspension of disbelief when it comes to these stories and their fantastical elements.

Okay...About all the comments on the "length-and-forth" comments/issues the readers here have...

Realizing these ARE fantasy stories, and that you put the size at the beginning of the story, I would advise others to STOP READING at that point, if it is too "fantastical" for one to believe....

OR ELSE, imagine a horse cock on a man, and keep reading!!

BUT, keep your comments to yourself If they have to be critical and non-constructive...nobody wants to read your 'disbelief' comments!

Sweety little sister, with a nasty/"slutty" side that comes out...I LOVE IT...cannot wait for the next chapters!

**5** Stars...!!

Fantastic fun and sexy story. More please