the story was good up til the point where you gave him a 15" cock that kind of ruined it make it realistic leave the monster cocks and tits out or put the story in the fantasy area
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Anonymous03/06/08
teenie weenie short dick man
I got to the part with the 15 " dick and stopped there - why is it that all the teenie weenie short dick writers always overcompensate and give their characters what they don't have themselves?
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Anonymous07/19/08
Sorry
Sorry, but I coould not finish
your story. I sttarted laughing
at the 15 inch cock. And my eyes
teared up so bad I had to quit.
Sorry...
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Anonymous04/24/09
Can I please breathe?
Most people stopped at the 15 inch cock part. WHAT THE FUCK??? I, personally, am a fan of huge dicks. I've only read chapter one and cum seven times! I'll read chapter two either later tonight, or tomorrow. You see, it's hard for me to find stories I like, so when I DO find one, I spread it out for more pleasure.
BTW, I'm not a member, but you can call me SexyVixen.
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Anonymous07/13/09
Nice
Keep up the good work, big cock or not!
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Anonymous09/28/09
Nothing like going overboard
Loved the story but 15 1/2 inches and larger round than a can of coke, ridiculous.
then the 15 inch dick comes into play, if you gotta pick a Dick size make it somewhat believable. Rest of the story predictable but ok.
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Anonymous11/09/11
Outrageously stupid
The 15 1/2" cock was one thing but this, " I moaned as her mouth slid over the head" of a cock wider than a coke can...took the cake. Too much.
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Anonymous06/19/12
Not bad but hard to believe
I have never heard of a 15 inch cock so that to me is hard to believe. If it was around 10/12 inches then I could believe.
The rest of the story was good but not brilliant.
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Anonymous09/27/13
15 1/2 inches? Give me a break....
Not even peeking over the reality-horizon, complete rubbish, don't bother taking this any further, it can't get any worse, athough I bet you're willing to give it a try...
I stopped reading your story as soon as you said you were 15 1/2" and wider than a coke can. Your story may be great but you lost me as a reader with that so I will never know if is good or not. Based on the unrealistic size though I'm pretty sure the rest of the story is also, so nothing missed!
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Anonymous06/04/14
no way.
As soon as fifteen and a half was mentioned any erotic vibes were easily thrown out the window. Some common sense is needed when writing stories. Please get some realistic writing skills.
English
so-so
the story was good up til the point where you gave him a 15" cock that kind of ruined it make it realistic leave the monster cocks and tits out or put the story in the fantasy area
teenie weenie short dick man
I got to the part with the 15 " dick and stopped there - why is it that all the teenie weenie short dick writers always overcompensate and give their characters what they don't have themselves?
Sorry
Sorry, but I coould not finish
your story. I sttarted laughing
at the 15 inch cock. And my eyes
teared up so bad I had to quit.
Sorry...
Can I please breathe?
Most people stopped at the 15 inch cock part. WHAT THE FUCK??? I, personally, am a fan of huge dicks. I've only read chapter one and cum seven times! I'll read chapter two either later tonight, or tomorrow. You see, it's hard for me to find stories I like, so when I DO find one, I spread it out for more pleasure.
BTW, I'm not a member, but you can call me SexyVixen.
Nice
Keep up the good work, big cock or not!
Nothing like going overboard
Loved the story but 15 1/2 inches and larger round than a can of coke, ridiculous.
I've seen the foot long plus...
...freak shows, and I find it more amusing than anything else. This was pretty hot though...Interesting...
The story starts and flows well...
then the 15 inch dick comes into play, if you gotta pick a Dick size make it somewhat believable. Rest of the story predictable but ok.
Outrageously stupid
The 15 1/2" cock was one thing but this, " I moaned as her mouth slid over the head" of a cock wider than a coke can...took the cake. Too much.
Not bad but hard to believe
I have never heard of a 15 inch cock so that to me is hard to believe. If it was around 10/12 inches then I could believe.
The rest of the story was good but not brilliant.
15 1/2 inches? Give me a break....
Not even peeking over the reality-horizon, complete rubbish, don't bother taking this any further, it can't get any worse, athough I bet you're willing to give it a try...
Sorry but!
I stopped reading your story as soon as you said you were 15 1/2" and wider than a coke can. Your story may be great but you lost me as a reader with that so I will never know if is good or not. Based on the unrealistic size though I'm pretty sure the rest of the story is also, so nothing missed!
no way.
As soon as fifteen and a half was mentioned any erotic vibes were easily thrown out the window. Some common sense is needed when writing stories. Please get some realistic writing skills.
don't stop
Love it don't stop buy the end had my cuck hard and in hand
kIDDINg ...!!!!!!,RiGht......!!!!!!!!!!!!
15 inch! .. Do you know how big is that ...dude some common sense please ....!!!!!!@#
Fuck!!
I have a friend that I sext that is that big and I want to fuck him sooo bad! I loved your story and would definitely love to read more!
penis length
the largest human penis on record is 13 1/2 inches. do some research before you write.
13 1/2 an annony took it all in his mouth and up his ass
5 for research!!!!
KEEP WRITING - YOU HAVE THE TALENT FOR IT
WHO CARE ABOUT THE EXACT MEASUREMENTS - IT IS THE TURN ON THAT MATTERS - OTHER WISE YOU WOULD NOT BE READING THIS. :-)
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