great story. i didn't see that ending coming and it knocked me for a loop. Great job!
That was absoulutely great. So hot :P And wow, that ending was a complete suprise! Well done - great story
Ending was quite sombre. Liked this story a lot.
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I didn't see that coming!
great story. i didn't see that ending coming and it knocked me for a loop. Great job!
Wow
That was absoulutely great. So hot :P
And wow, that ending was a complete suprise!
Well done - great story
Awesome
Ending was quite sombre. Liked this story a lot.
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