All Comments on 'It Just Happened Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Seems Jen is hell bent on ruining his life.

After Bev accused her of being a slut now she doesnt want little brother near her. Jen and her husband are both pieces of work. A shame he didnt just join the army and get on with life instead of going back to Peyton Place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
why not

i think he should fuck every woman in his home town ...and as long as he has his own room he should do as much as possible at his brothers house....make them squeal ....and make it more than just beverly ...do every woman he went to school with ...if jen has a problem with it she can always divorce ed so she can get extra dick also unless his brother is into swinging ...which if thats the case then ben could also help big brother out a lot with his wife ...after all ben just wants to fuck ...hes not like jen and looking for marriage ....hes young and just looking t ofuck ...and whats wrong with bankrupsy ...that way he gets out from under his debt and hes free n clear of what his ex did ....after all if he wants to he could still build his own house ...and probably do it free over time with scrap left over from jobs he works on...believe me every job has left overs ....if he wants he can do bankrupsy and people will then be more open to loaning him money as they now know he cant declare bankrupsy again for 7 years ...hed then have excellent credit....why not give ben some balls hes young and let him do as normal men his age do and become a male whore till he finds someone to settle with if he so desires ...personally i dont believe in marriage myself other than a steady piece of cunt when i cant get others

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Keep writing

Looking forward to tomorrows posting. Love this story. Please dont make this guy a wimp.

ralphcralphcabout 16 years ago
great

please continue in a hurry. thanks

gsmoke13gsmoke13over 13 years ago
this is awfully juvenille

awfully

xtremeddxtremeddabout 13 years ago
Stop acting like you paid $39.88 at WallyWorld for the book.

Well told tale... worth $9.88 so far!

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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