Eaves-Dropper

Well done

I enjoyed it very much. Please continue with it. I can't wait for part 2 if you are going to write another chapter.

hmmm

It was nither good nor bad. Great start, but like said before me need to work on the character building. Here's a hint. be more discriptive about your characters. Allow the readers to visulize what they look like and such.

But that's another story, you say...

...but where is this other story?

Ummmm....

OK. For sexuality, it was a pretty good story. But the girls, even though they were virgins, were WAY too naive about the world of sex. They didn't even know HOW they were supposed to have sex. They just winged it. At first, they weren't sure what the penis was called. That would make more sense if maybe the girls were either retarded or were like 10...but to be 19 and NOT know what sex is? Come on brother! I know better than that. Good effort though

Would love to read part 2 when the girls find out about their pregnancy, and the development of their relationship.

You could have kept going

You have some good starts but they are to short maybe the parents accept and roll with it.Come on put a little more to the story's