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FarnexFarnexabout 16 years ago
I'm right there with ya brother!

Hi, My name is Farnex and I love tits, especially big, luscious, firm, Passion melons. If tits are the bread and butter of your stories I promise to be a loyal reader. I look forward to your future stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hot

good but way too short, needed more details especially on the sex part..

69Dallas69Dallasover 12 years ago
nice!

What a nice fun blast! Pun intended!

alex_catalex_catabout 12 years ago
Needs a proofreader

A bit sophomoric but still kind of a nice visual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You should pursued that girl and made her your bitch,dude

Fuck man,ya had it all,and ya let it get away,the mistakes we make when were young, a person has to relive it over and over,woulda,coulda shoulda,I bet she's a great piece of ass too,but ya never found that out either,shit, thats too bad,some guys fucking her all the time now,playing sucking and fucking those great big tits as we speak

oldtwitoldtwitover 4 years ago
Great story

What a great story, fast and to the point great description and many a mans fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good premise.

But seriously rushed.

Needed much more details/specifics about how she likes her breasts treated.

Needed her to rell him what he liked about breasts, and about her breasts specifically.

Needed some sloooow baring of them.

Needed some extended description of the playing with them that made her cum.

Needed some playing wity his cock and balls while she allows him to play with her breasts.

Needs her teasing him with the possibilities of a titty fuck before it begins.

Four stars.

Anonymous
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