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Billydee2Billydee2about 16 years ago
Very Good Story

The kid sure gets around. Hope there is many more installments, its really starting to get good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Excellent Story Build

Since I'm a pedant, there were a number of typos, but overall, this is a well written story--characters continue to build and the actions aren't telegraphed. Some mystery in the story as well as some good erotic writing. Well done. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

‘Disappointed that they invited others into their relationship for a foursome. ‘Thought that they had something going on, but now they just look like male and female sluts

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