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Picking Up My Hot Wife in a Bar

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/06/11

Comment on the comments

The story's okay, for what it is -- a standard cuckold story.

What I don't get is why there are so many comments bashing it. Jeez, don't you people get that the sexual hook for the story is that the husband gets used and humiliated? That's the thing that gets cuckold fetishists hot.

So by God, quit bashing their fantasy. If it isn't to your taste, just read something else.

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by Anonymous02/22/11

next!

Husband is going and Steve is next. She can practice til she gets it right, and he'll be done with her.

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by DWornock07/05/11

1* bucause it is about old folks

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by Anonymous09/28/11

DWmoroncok is so stupid

she thinks a lawsuit is something you wear to court

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by Jim5112/27/11

Humm me too :)

I read this story to my wife Elyse and she shocked me with a, " Jim, I would like to do something like this if you can handle any possible out come." We did it and I'll be writing about my wife's experience, simular but still different!

Nice story, really turned on my wife and I's sex life...

Thanks

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by Anonymous12/27/11

Why?

Why do it in the first place, why act like a little sissy boy cockold and run off home, why think that this is the first time she met or fucked this guy, why would this turn on a stright guy? Its just a story cause no hot woman would be with a loser like this.

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by Anonymous12/27/11

What a NASTY SLUT. This writer and Jim51 are not straight and are cuckolds it's what cuckolds do they let their wives fuck whoever and how many people the wives want and then they clean the wives up it's what all the readers that love these stories and say so and moan about other readers that don't also want to do, they are cuckolds too. Good luck TO the cuckolds and their whore wives hopefully they will catch some nasty STD and die slowly and painfully.

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by Anonymous07/09/12

Good - BUT

This couple, this guy, as you described them and their plans?

He wouldn't have picked up on Terry and when he approached his wife and asked her what was going on - well, this is not the kind of guy who is going to accept what happens after their quick talk.

When Steve comes next week, hubby will be gone! Sad, sorrowful, hurt and emotionally distraught.

Oh well, she's all grown up and liquor or not - she made her decision and respect for hubby and their marriage - Nope!

Thanks anyway, it is well done, erotic and believable.

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by betrayedbylove07/09/12

Wife Became a Slut

The husband did not go into this fantasy date thinking his wife was going to go to another man. It was their fantasy together. However, she turned him into a willing cuck and she became a cheating wife. Both should die.

FUCK ANYONE WHO THINKS OTHERWISE

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by Anonymous07/09/12

Judas Iscariot

guzzling thick sperm, his cornhole took a shafting, betrayed!

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by Anonymous08/08/12

Dear Author(s)

I read and appreciate your effort to address all of us who take the time to comment.

Personally, I don't have a problem with game playing couples where the wife ends up getting some strange, and even exciting, thrilling extramarital sex...no problem...well written - it can be erotic!

In this story, I do have a problem and quite simply, neither had ever been with others, their game was to end up with eachother and then she moved it along, put hubby off (he believed and trusted her so) and implied all is okay and she will see him at home! Well, WARNING - but, he trusted her so home he goes and still doesn't think anything is going on. Well, Pure & Simple - she cheated, she lied, she mislead him and she comitted adultery (they had not agreed this to be part of their plan) and she is so confidant that hubby will go along that she invited Steve to the house for hubby to watch and maybe do a 3way?

I liked the story but you didn't set it up to be cheating on her part and then when you could have addressed that part and found the right words to make the story acceptable or even a little agreeable - You left it with him being told...Steve is coming - to do her at home???!!!

Basically - Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous09/02/12

Share it

The couple clearly stated they have been married for a number of years and they need a park to start to reignite the flame,

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by Anonymous09/13/12

A New Slut Wife

Actually, I think this is not a true story but rather fantasy. It doesn't matter though, I liked it alot. I have the same fantasy but my wife knows she has my permission to do it. I would just be sitting home waiting anxiously to hear what went down and would have been hard as a rock all night thinking of the possabilities... Great story, hope you wrote about when steve came over...lol

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by Anonymous10/12/12

Hot

I give it one giant load. Well done...

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by Lickideesplit01/15/13

So much for 'role play'

This was closer to 'hay roll' than 'role play'. Sweetie changed the game on Hubby at least five times! Accepting a drink from stranger (maybe an honest mistake, easily fixed); moving away from Hubby after implying she wanted to flirt with stranger; letting Hubby leave her alone with stranger after the play had gotten hotter; going outside with stranger, clearly for some sexual outlet! And finally, setting up a threesome at their home without consultation. They can be separated by the time the Bull comes visiting!

Title was misleading ... The Bull did NOT pick up Hubby's Hot Wife ... He CREATED (or at least converted) Hubby's regular wife into something else!

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by Anonymous05/17/13

Misleading

A monogamous title. You implied they would have fun and remain faithful, just teasing and playing at sexual conduct games?

For an honest and faithful wife she goes from enjoying the attention of another man, totally ignores her husband, agrees to go to a private booth, still ignoring husband, misleads husband on cell phone, tells him friendly conversation only, has hubby go home and then indulges her slut self with the guy in his car, then exchanges phone humbers(?).

This is not the story you suggested we read. This story is one that in real life, hubby would be devastated, heart broken, distraught and damn near suicidal. Hubby did not go for this, he trusted her - Big Mistake, unforeseen but SAD!

End of Marriage.

This hubby would be reeling with delirious, emotional stress and I guarantee you he would have told her to call Steve and tell him NOT to show up and further he would tell her she needed to go to Steve elsewhere. In the meantime, hubby would be trying to get his heart calmed down, his rational senses back and begin to figure out where he was going from here...Alone!

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by Anonymous05/30/13

Well she is gone!!!

This guy just lost his wife! It's all over but the pain and suffering now! Just get a lawyer and try and reclaim your dignity limp dick!!!

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by Anonymous07/23/13

This is our secret fantasy

My wife and I often hint at this sort of scenario during our love making and mutual masturbation sessions. She knows I would love it, but could never admit to it, and likewise so would she. She also knows that I have had homo-erotic experiences in school, that would allow me to find a creamed pussy quite a turn-on. If she were ever to take this big step, it would put me in a state of complete eroticism for weeks, I'm sure. I wish she would.

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by Anonymous08/07/13

great sad story

I am sure this has been played a million times...in real life situations...I can name a bunch of couples that could be the source of the story... the wife moves on and the husband wastes away

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by Anonymous08/12/13

Very hot

Read the same basic story many times before. Still enjoy the slight variations. Thanks for the woody and the hell with the self-righteous cretins who posted negative reviews. Trolls.

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by Anonymous10/04/13

Another shit eating dog. WTF

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by Anonymous11/26/13

Great story

I can relate to this story as the wife and I have ever had the almost the same experience. It is a real turn on hearing the details from your wife while fucking her used cunt. Although don't be surprised when she goes out on her own and gets fucked and doesn't tell you about it. Don't get a divorce just enjoy the great sex she will give you, and she will tell you about some stuff from her filling around congratulations.

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by parker352212/20/13

Hot Story

I like his discovery of another mans cum leaking out of his wifes pussy as he fingers her.
"Like an animal starved for food" She engulfed his big cock as he straddled her head fucking her mouth. HOT!

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by youngtie1201/20/14

second story

a possible second tory could be made about the next week to show how the husband acts or if the wife becomes a cheating slut

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by shang4004/09/14

so much fun

Its an great experience for me to wait for wife to come home after her fucking.
Parag, a younger and very strong friend of ours gave me such anxious waiting. She went with him to market and came with her cunt full of his thick juice. That night I had meal of tasty shake. After a month we had threesome with me licking both od them while he took her doggie.

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by Tim41341309/01/14

A typical ending

to an overdone story line. Hubby was stupid for leaving her at the bar and she was fortunate that he was (apparently) okay with what she did. I can't believe a real couple would have the evening come to such a conclusion unless they had talked about before going to the bar. I'd love to read a story where Wifey endures some heavy consequences after her unapproved fling.
Oh, and the writing wasn't literate enough for my taste. 3 stars.

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by Anonymous05/26/15

divorce

As soon as he realized she had someone else cum in her he would have been shocked. Knowing he had been betrayed. Hearing her story he would have realizes he lost her to a big cock that she enjoyed more she ever did with him. Finally realizing what happening he would have pushed her away as sloppy seconds were coming. Lost trust and respect would now curtail. Then next day the divorce would start after he took all his stuff and left or he could have taken everything and just split. Stupid big dick slut. Tell her she had better get get checked for STD's and leave at that moment and take after sex pill so she doesn't get knocked up.

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by Anonymous08/02/15

It's All Over Now

She had control from the first few minutes Steve showed up and...did she ever look around for her husband - NO!

Getting her husband to go home fit right in with her sensual vibrations and it didn't once get her to even consider slowing down the events with Steve and the SUV fucking couldn't have cum quick enough so...

Wife discovers something new and exciting in the world of exploration, discovers that she can get hubby to cooperate and discovers that she likes the new adventures, so...

Hotwife, cuck hubby! I won't say too bad because he never planned or suspected something like this and neither did she BUT - Now she discovered this activity and hubby can just go along, she is!

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by Anonymous08/02/15

Annony knows everything about being a cuck, evbery woman he ever had cucked him!!

gave it a 5 for effort and content. great story

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by Anonymous11/01/15

Lovely wife does the same thing

My good looking wife goes out to dinner with a customer of mine. This happens about once a month when I am away for a couple of nights on business, She dresses up for him and they meet for dinner. He told her he loves her seamed nylons and hiheels. She then follows him back to his place...he lives alone and they go at it. She tells me about it and it turns me on. He has a very big dick and she loves taking all of him. I love my sexy wife.

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by Goodhue07/30/16

A Couple of Shits!

What a couple of dumb shits!
He's a stupid jackass!
She's a cheating slut!
Here's hoping that they both suffer from painful STDs,thanks to Mr. Big Dick,and then die os aids a few months after the divorce!

AND,NO,I don't understand why a happily married husband and/or wife,especially those married as long as these two clowns were cheat! He's a sicko and she's a cheating cunt!

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by Anonymous08/13/16

Want

I want to see what wife says when he brings home a hot young woman with big firm tits and tight body. Would do it before next weekend to see if she liked how it feels. Be good to see this in next chapter.

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by Anonymous11/11/16

Very Hot!

Very hot story!!! Would love my wife to do this. Think about it often. Want to feel my cock in my wife's hot recently fucked pussy.

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by Anonymous11/17/16

By next week

Even the dumbest husband would be history.

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by Anonymous11/21/16

It's Time

To kick the cheating WHORE to the curb! Why? Because there will be another "Honey, I couldn't help myself" moment for the "loving wife" where she "couldn't control herself" but at least her half wittol husband knows that she 'still' loves him!?!

Congratulation Tavlor ... you now are part of the ever growing Cuck writers club! First thing you will learn is the importance of remaining silent while locked in your bedroom closet while your wife "entertains" real men in YOUR bed ....

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by Anonymous02/08/17

Wife likes

Don't worry about your wife or comments about your marriage.my little.redhead loves huge black clock gets it all the time and our marriage is fine give what she wants

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by Anonymous02/08/17

Puke.

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