All Comments on 'Timeless Love Ch. 10'

Such a great story! Loved it! Cant wait for more of your stories to come! Thanks

You have to write a story for each brother! They deserve it. And you have to let us know how the future changed because Charlie didn't die. Can't wait for more.

I loved the name of the dog.

I like your story but it seems like it was rushed. And it seemed kind of choppy, the words diddnt seem to flow. Over all though, i loved the plot and cant wait for the sequal.

Glad you are continuing the lads stories it has the makings of a great series. It is true this one didnt flow quite as well as the others, the story was good but almost like a rush to the finishing post. However it probably only seems like that becuse of the exceptionally high quality we have come to expect from you . see ye spoil us *grin

A very nice ending for Charles and Cynara! Perhaps in the sequel, the brothers (or at least one of them) will be able to travel in time as Cynara did? It'd be interesting to see how things changed since history was changed.

you are the best so far ! plz more of your stories and more sequels for finley and the rest of them !

i love this story it was one of my favorites....i cant beleive its already finished....thats teh only bad part of it.but either way i love it i hope i get to read what happens to the rest of the family i hope for more time taveling....

story Of yours that I have read(in this I include all the previous chapters of this story) and I have reaaly enjoyed it,and can now look forward to more stories in this series.Please can you save Katherine and bring Wes back in time?

I was skirting around this story because time travel doesn't exactly scream out to me as the most entertaining story. But I LOVED this. I mean really, really loved this. I almost cried. So glad I got to read it all in one sitting though. If I'd come around when it was first posted I'd probably have an epileptic fit waiting for chapters :) so thank you for the story and I plan on reading it over and over and over and...over again ;)

<3 αιηє

this is the best story I have everrr read I'm never really interested in time travel but omgosh this made me cry!!!! So much ( oh and I loved the puppys name!!!) great job.

Please write more chapters this is the best story i'm obsessed! seriously write more its so good : )

I loved this story. The characters seemed to live and breath making it such a great read , thank you so much

This is good story. I like it. :) I hope you write other character's story

when i read chapter 9,i got worried that these two people cant be together,i hate sad endings,but this story touched my heart.wonderfully written.thank oyu for the happy ending

This story was absolutely amazing!!!! It made me laugh, it made me cry and it made me believe in everlasting love!!! I had hoped you could revise this story and make it longer....especially, in Wes' and Katherine's story, you have Katherine worshiping Cynara as though they've been around each other for a while. Except she never came home to meet Cynara in this story. You truly have a gift in writing and I'm glad that I have read your wonderful stories!!!!! :)

I can't believe it's over. You had me from chapter one!! Totally awsome!!! Kudos

cute

It was a wonderful read though I just hope that they did not end in the past.

This was really, really fun. I loved reading it.

Fabulous story, enough details to know the characters but not so much to be overwhelming. Cellophanesmile your writing is great, it flows nicely. This is the first series I’ve read of yours, I’m seriously excited to read more, relieved to see you’ve written quite a few!

Time travel romances with detailed sex are my favorite genre!

Thank you for writing, please continue to share!

Sincerely, gunnysdoll

Los Angeles, California