All Comments on 'While He's Away'

Interesting and deserving of a better score than a 1.0.

As wispy as can be. Email sex is less than phone sex.

Bare, raw, unfiltered. I've never cybered before, but this makes me want to. It is what it is, and what it is will suffice.

Definitely deserved more than a 1.0! Yeesh! I do like more of a scene in the stories I read and write, but for a transcript, that was hot...hotter than a few of the cyber conversations I've had anyway!