...why any guy would want to pull out of a woman and come on her instead of inside her (or in her mouth, etc.) I mean, I know why they have to do that in the movies, but it kinda breaks the suspension of disbelief when they do it in text porn where you are supposed to identify with the characters.
I thought your description of a straight, old fashioned tale was wonderful. The baby sitter 'getting caught with his pants down' and then almost being forced to participate, is not a new idea. However, you handled it well with new twists and clear language.
I read the previous comment but I thought the 'pulling-out' created a strong and essential link to the porn movie we were watching. In my mind,the participants were slipping into the movie mode and that encouraged the reader to 'watch' this fantasy as one would, a movie.
I've been jotting down thoughts and fantasies for a while, and finally decided to see what other people thought of what I write. I struggle with the language (espcially how to name and describe women and their parts) and try to paint a clear picture. Thanks for the feedback.
Another note, I typically write about things that are "real plus". That is, I did babysit for the couple above and found their porn stash. I didn't get caught, but wanted to add to the tale.
I love it! The thought of fucking that older woman's ass is a winner, big time! I hope they have another chance to get dirty together, there's nothing like a naughty older woman who likes a cock sliding in and out of her asshole!
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...why any guy would want to pull out of a woman and come on her instead of inside her (or in her mouth, etc.) I mean, I know why they have to do that in the movies, but it kinda breaks the suspension of disbelief when they do it in text porn where you are supposed to identify with the characters.
A Good Honest Story Line!
I thought your description of a straight, old fashioned tale was wonderful. The baby sitter 'getting caught with his pants down' and then almost being forced to participate, is not a new idea. However, you handled it well with new twists and clear language.
I read the previous comment but I thought the 'pulling-out' created a strong and essential link to the porn movie we were watching. In my mind,the participants were slipping into the movie mode and that encouraged the reader to 'watch' this fantasy as one would, a movie.
Did you intend to do this?
Thanks
I've been jotting down thoughts and fantasies for a while, and finally decided to see what other people thought of what I write. I struggle with the language (espcially how to name and describe women and their parts) and try to paint a clear picture. Thanks for the feedback.
Another note, I typically write about things that are "real plus". That is, I did babysit for the couple above and found their porn stash. I didn't get caught, but wanted to add to the tale.
Well done
I love it! The thought of fucking that older woman's ass is a winner, big time! I hope they have another chance to get dirty together, there's nothing like a naughty older woman who likes a cock sliding in and out of her asshole!
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