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wow
i really didn't think i would like a story about centaurs but u'v changed my mind..brilliant story..i look forword to reading to ur present and future stories..^-^
i really like ur stories.... they r awesome.. pls continue da series..
''2 thumbs way up''
A true work of literary art! Beautifully descriptive language, literary mechanics, an almost poetic story with just the right amount of erotic excursions. A true heroe's tale. You should consider writing fiction on a larger scale with the way you can paint a picture in the reader's mind, if you do not do so already. :)
Romantic
I love the romance in your stories. I hope you write novel you would excel at it.
Beautiful
Your stories are all so beautifully written, I can't help but fall in love with the characters. I have read this one several times and it continues to be wonderful.
Beautiful
You write beautifully and you give to our imagination. Thank you
so fantastic :)
I really loved this story, I can't wait to read the third one :)
brill
I enjoyed reading this I had to read each chapter right after the previous one as I had to find out what happened next.I was not disappointed It was a lovly story and I look forward to reading more
Centaur Genitals
Amy, you need not apologize for your concept of Centaur male genitals. I have seen pictures of an ancient Greek vase and a statuette that have genitals such as you describe, They were human style genitals at the bottom of the human torso where it joins the front legs, the genitals of the statuette were a bit large for a human but small for a horse. What you describe in your introductory notes to chapter 7 closely matches ancient greek depictions even if they are not the most common version.
Ok it took me some searching but I finally found it. (qv. Centaur Genitals)
In connection with the immediately previous comment that I made about centaur genitals. I found the image of the statuette. It may be viewed at:
http://www.mlahanas.de/Greeks/Mythology/Centau r002.html
I did not find the vase mentioned, but there the genitals were not so clearly visible nor could the degree of endowment be well assessed.
In the case of the statuette, the penis is broken off so its exact form cannot be determined. However, its girth is substantial, so that it may be presumed that the endowment was substantial.
Wow!
Amy--This is the third time I've read through your stories, and you are brilliant. The characters are so engaging, and your writing easily rivals most commercial authors on the market. Keep writing, we all want more!!!
Everyone who keeps complaining--Regarding Centaur anatomy, there really is no one official description. As with most creatures mythical, Centaurs are what you imagine them to be. It's what makes Amy's stories so wonderful. If you read these stories, how about suspending your disbelief so other people can enjoy them, huh?
WHOOO-WEEE!!!!!! Now THAT'S what I'm talking about!
Damn right we fantasy/sci-fi fans were missing out on GREAT centaur storylines! Look...I know you've gotten better since writing these and I look forward to reading them and the story chain of other authors adding to your universe. I LOVE your intro explanation of YOUR story and universe....DAMN STRAIGHT!!! Thanks for a great story...you'll only get better with time. You're on your way to "Sensai" or "Master" status [gotta work a little more in physical description of characters as they are aroused/fucking and the sensual buildup to some masterful sex!] but hey....It's YOUR universe and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through! [After I've read the other stories!]
book
you should really write a novel
i would buy it
loved it
I just have to say that i loved reading your stories! I actually stayed up all night and all day reading them in my room. . Dont let what others comment influence you to change your methods of writing. Great work!
-love,an anonomous woman
So sorry
That it ends.....would love to see these stories go on and on..... Thanks for sharing your vision with us!
Praise
I love this series! A mix of love, sex and adventure. I hope you would write more stories like this in the future.
A great story. one I have read many times and loved doing so thank you for writing and sending it in
History Lesson
Actually, early in ancient Greek history, centaurs did have male anatomy on the front of their human bodies. This changed over time, but your depiction would be accurate.
I love your stories by the way. This is the second time I've read your centaur books in particular.
Gifted!
You have a natural talent. I keep reading your centaur's stories ever so often. Very spicy!
I loved this series
I know that I'll be coming back to re-read these stories (both Thayer's and Callum's); their characters were well developed, very well built, I love their names and how commited they are to their mates, (now they've found them); I love that the 3 brothers excel at various things like carving, target practise, hunting etc.
The plot around them was exciting and interesting - I'm dying to start reading Soren's series - I know it will be as fantastic as the previous two, and I'll be re-reading it as well in the future ! :))
These stories are the best!
I just discovered these stories this week and I have re-read them all twice already! I would love it if you wrote more stories about centaurs!
nice
thats a 5 star Story. I am very happy that Callum finaly found his Soul mate after the tragedy with katharia and his son. very nice Story and i am also glad that you finishd it! Literotica is full of unfinished hot stories.
love centaurs
Please complete this story with the birth of their child
Too Lovely!
I started the evening with the first installment and couldn't stop until there was no more story to be read! Well done and thank you! Please continue with the story!😄
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