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by WickedEve02/14/08

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Your poem has been mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread. Thanks for sharing your poem. It's very good!

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by UnderYourSpell02/14/08

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One to read over and over I particularly liked 'To hopscotch through the minefields'.

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by Unbridled_Passion02/15/08

very good

I enjoyed this poem, but IMO I think you should have ended with...

'but, the end was bitter'...

just my opinion

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by ozymandiask02/15/08

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Previous comment was me!

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by dominateme102/16/08

Sad

I enjoyed the poem but it was so sad. Who doesn't remember a love that's gone? It evokes sad memories, which was the purpose so . . .well done!

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