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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Unusual look at full hands engaged in task monumental.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Spare and finely wrought

The phrasing made me think of ee cummings, a little. It's a very spare piece of writing, tight-reined, but you convey a lot with it. Well done!

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
Tip toeing between the lines

Is when your brain tells your eyes to go take a lesson at the nearest ballet studio. Poems allow this kind of play wi5th sound and meaning within and across lines -only poems never prose could do it. Thank you much for the talented wordsmith here.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BRAS BANS NABS

peekers and seekers. TK U MLJ LV NV

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