by SunrockSin
The phrasing made me think of ee cummings, a little. It's a very spare piece of writing, tight-reined, but you convey a lot with it. Well done!
Is when your brain tells your eyes to go take a lesson at the nearest ballet studio. Poems allow this kind of play wi5th sound and meaning within and across lines -only poems never prose could do it. Thank you much for the talented wordsmith here.