All Comments on 'The Doll'

At first I was thinking that the dolls he got were the toys he was playing with, but there was a little too much detail in the story for that, but when I reread it I realized that it controlled the actual person. Pretty good story. Seeing as how you have six dolls, you should write what the other ones are ;o)

nice story, would really like to see more

I think you should turn this into a series, showing

the women he controlls with the other dolls as well as the continuing sexual exploitation of Lauren. Also, the stories could stand to be a bit longer; more details would be interesting.

He has 5 More Dolls it would seem he has 5 more Dolls to collect. and / or a Harem to start.