All Comments on 'Summer with Daddy Ch. 01'

Sorry!, but the story seem so UNreal I could not get into it, better luck next time!!..

Your story brings to mind a fantasy I have of my daughter's friend and her mother. Please do part two. I hope Daddy's friend joins in.

Yes, it did jump right into it and although not REALLY likely, that's why they call them fantasies.

Keep up the good work!

Summer is three months long. There should be lots more to write about before her Mom has her hands full trying to undo all the fun stuff her Dad has introduced her to. Let your fantasy run amok. My hand will be busy.

Way Out, and beautifully "wicked".

You can visit my house anytime, just bring your body, I'll supply the champagne.

It was okay, but not fantastic. I suggest typing it up in a program like Microsoft Word, because there were a lot of grammar problems in this chapter.

The sex was hot, the dialogue was super sexy...that's what it's about, right? To those who suggested it's unreal, I respond so is just about every good movie ever made.

Keep up the good work

J

I liked it. There are some grammar errors and the over-use of the word 'daddy' sounds mildly creepy. Other than that it was pretty hot, keep on writing.

This definitely got my panties soaking :)

I enjoyed the story, now on to part 2.

Your 18-year old certainly knows how to treat her daddy! Well told, and of course arousing. Thanks, DaddysSlutToy.

I want my dad to fuck me

This is my 'go to' story when I need a little daddy daughter dream time.

Such a horny story. I soak my pussy when I read... 'do you want daddy back inside you' and... 'that's my girl'

So wet now and ready to be fucked.

I always call my boyfriend daddy. He is 51 now and I still young and fresh. He calls himself daddy. I swear he may have read this story. He does it just like this. I love being called his little girl. He doesn't ha e kids of his own but he makes me feel like his little girl.

I cam so fast I love this 5 stars

Want a daddy like that to bathe me and fuck me. Made me spread my legs and play with my pussy until I came. Great story! Still wet and horny!

As i read the storry , i got so dam wet, i wich i could get fucked so badley....