All Comments on 'Honey Hole'

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voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueabout 16 years ago
Great imagery

At last, an anal story where the lovers use lube instead of believing that you don't need it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Hot!

I loved the entire story! Well written and very much like it is a true happening. I hope it was a real and true happening. and you continue to fill us in on your adventures!

flashmor@aol.com

Thanks again

Donny

GAnnEGAnnEabout 16 years ago
And a Sweet Tale it is!

Nicely done and very realistic! You have believable characters bringing honest reactions to the story; the results speak for themselves! Bravo & Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
One of the better stories on Literotica

The characters, setting, and story are all excellent. In general the writing is very good as well, and the tag at the end was a particularly nice touch. More proofreading would help, especially where the use of commas and semi-colons are concerned. "Yeah" is misspelled as "Yea," a common problem on the internet. Also, "taught" is used where "taut" is intended and "half" instead of "have." But that's nitpicking, really.

BroadusBroadusover 1 year ago

Fiction well done, it reminded me of an unforgettable night a long time ago that I ‘ ll never forget. Never happened again, unfortunately.

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