by Martins
At last, an anal story where the lovers use lube instead of believing that you don't need it.
I loved the entire story! Well written and very much like it is a true happening. I hope it was a real and true happening. and you continue to fill us in on your adventures!
flashmor@aol.com
Thanks again
Donny
Nicely done and very realistic! You have believable characters bringing honest reactions to the story; the results speak for themselves! Bravo & Thank you!
The characters, setting, and story are all excellent. In general the writing is very good as well, and the tag at the end was a particularly nice touch. More proofreading would help, especially where the use of commas and semi-colons are concerned. "Yeah" is misspelled as "Yea," a common problem on the internet. Also, "taught" is used where "taut" is intended and "half" instead of "have." But that's nitpicking, really.
Fiction well done, it reminded me of an unforgettable night a long time ago that I ‘ ll never forget. Never happened again, unfortunately.