by teniellejd
Another winner from Teniellejd! Wanted more details on the night between Heather and Rita, but hopefully that will happen in Chapter 3.
I was wet at the start, the middle and dripping at the end
loved evry word of it
more more please
I am a guy and I don't normally go into Lesbian stories, but I do fall in for this one. Especially attracted by the feminine charisma Rita emanated. More pls!
I'm not typically a fan of BDSM, but that element provides a perfect contrast to the rita/heather dynamic. It fits perfectly, so I'll gladly take it in! Great character dev, and story tension too. We need more please! Maybe anita needs to use a strap on with her mom.
Lovely story had me wet from the begining to the end. Love stories of older experienced women with younger girls
Was really hopin 4 the threesome. Author obviously dropped the story. Boo XP
A very intimate and beautiful story. Would love to see a third installment at the same pace as the two previous. Don't rush the events but I want to know what happens to Anita. I hope there is a loving threesome in there somewhere.
Keep writing stories like this please!
nice and good story pity about some of the spelling but it was worth reading
I love it...Anita’s mother has no idea that Rita was using her daughters face to have an orgasm on! So hot!
I had a very similar relationship with my mature curvy neighbor. I am an 19 year old very petite girl who wears kids clothes. My mother is thin and elderly, and never provided me with much nurturing love. So it was a natural attraction to my tall rubenesque neighbor, who nurtured me with her huge breasts, big round buttocks, and thick hairy blonde vagina which I loved to bury my nose in! I loved to call my lover Mommy, and I loved to suckle on her thick toes. We fantasized about being caught by my elderly mother. It was such a hot relationship!
As I mentioned before I am a writher of Erotic Romance. I loved the continuation of the tale. I can't wait to see if Rita has a three way with Heather and Anita. I have had a three way with a pair of Women. It was fantastic. It may have been better if I was a female as well, however I am not. I am a lesbian trapped in a man's body..
Great story. Lets have some more.
A thoroughly enjoyable story. Plenty of room to add additional chapters.
I too would love to see/hear/feel the Rita, Heather, and Anita threesome, though it introduces an awkward plot issue to deal with Anita's uptight mother. Perhaps the encounter being clandestine would add to the erotic tension? Thank you for the story so far.