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My TBI becomes Total Brain Instruct

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/03/08

OK, Could Be More Challenging

Pretty good story, but you make it too easy for the protagonist. There could be some resistance, challenge in the subjects. Make it harder for him, introduce some conflict.

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by Military Mech03/14/08

Excellent!

Excellent Story.... Mabey you should "go back" to the time of the injury.... Can't wait to see what happens!

Semper Fi!

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by Anonymous03/16/08

Hawt

Really liked it, can't wait for the sequel!

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by jott5004/08/15

great job!!!

hot hot hot!!!

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