by Victoria_Lucas
Such a painful metaphor! Dentistry anyone? Thanks for this poem.
Even if it is about one of my least favorite experiences. I'd like to see more sharp, painful word choices to make the language live up to the theme. Great read though. :-)
Was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews thread in the PF & D forum.
I know the voice and I wonder if it is, a good poem though.
An undertone of bitterness pervades — just taking care of a friend...
Some holes can't be filled. Very nicely done.
nothing it contains is worth saving, TK U MLJ LV NV