your story is like music to my ears. Glad to see you writing again.
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Anonymous02/24/08
stupid story
I gave up on this rediculous excuse for a story after the first 3 or 4 paragraphs. The author should be embarassed at writing this garbage.
the Ct. Yankee
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Anonymous02/24/08
hottt start
your one one my fav authurss i'm so glad your writnig again and i'm loveing the start of the new story keep going i'm sure gonna be looking for more
The negative comment was a pitiful excuse for feedback. I am so happy you are writing again! I love the tension and witty dialogue between the characters, and I can't wait to see what happens next! So glad you're back Ada!
p.s.
If you are going to leave feedback, be intelligent about it. It's okay to not like a story, but give some helpful critiquing- not harsh words that are as completely useless as, I'm sure, the author of the comment. Thanks!
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Anonymous02/28/08
OMG
that was amazing
keep those updates coming
you are my fav author on lit
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Anonymous03/02/08
wow
that totally blew my mind
wonderful start
keep those updates coming
Glad to see some new stuff from you. I didn't catch this first chapter when it posted and I'm off to catch myself up on the story.
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Anonymous03/30/08
Great beginning
Your stories really getting better and better. Very polished. Written like a pro. I would say you could give a few published romance authors a run for their money like Virginia Henley, Cassie Edwards(read one of her book. It was so so dull). Anyway good job Ada!
English
great beginning
please keep going soon!
Welcome back
Keep going... I just love your stories
I love this already
You are one of my favorite authors, and I was so glad to see you are posting a new story. Great beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter.
excellent start!
you are one of my favourite authors im so happy to see this new story and from the excellent kick off im eager to see the next installment...!
yes
your story is like music to my ears. Glad to see you writing again.
stupid story
I gave up on this rediculous excuse for a story after the first 3 or 4 paragraphs. The author should be embarassed at writing this garbage.
the Ct. Yankee
hottt start
your one one my fav authurss i'm so glad your writnig again and i'm loveing the start of the new story keep going i'm sure gonna be looking for more
Love it!
The negative comment was a pitiful excuse for feedback. I am so happy you are writing again! I love the tension and witty dialogue between the characters, and I can't wait to see what happens next! So glad you're back Ada!
p.s.
If you are going to leave feedback, be intelligent about it. It's okay to not like a story, but give some helpful critiquing- not harsh words that are as completely useless as, I'm sure, the author of the comment. Thanks!
OMG
that was amazing
keep those updates coming
you are my fav author on lit
wow
that totally blew my mind
wonderful start
keep those updates coming
love it
And I'm off to read the next chapter...
Good start!
Glad to see some new stuff from you. I didn't catch this first chapter when it posted and I'm off to catch myself up on the story.
Great beginning
Your stories really getting better and better. Very polished. Written like a pro. I would say you could give a few published romance authors a run for their money like Virginia Henley, Cassie Edwards(read one of her book. It was so so dull). Anyway good job Ada!
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