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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/27/08

Worth expanding

Good story marred by a few silly spelling mistakes (titties, not tities).
Altogether, not at all bad. Please write more.

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by jbhoft702/27/08

Spelling Mistakes

Otherwise it was a fine story. Now follow it up with him reading Greg's mind about what he truly wants out of his research. Then run with it give the boy a harem of girls and female teachers.

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by Anonymous02/29/08

Good Story!

Good Job. Very well done.

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