You left yourself enough material for at least two more chapters. Draw it out through the pregnancy when it's his this time. Maybe a chapter when a little girl is growing up.
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Anonymous07/31/10
I thought it was wonderful!
What a wonderful story. It's only right that he get to enjoy her sexually since he helped her and her bastard. Glad to hear he got to knock her up
a few more times. Brilliant mind you have!
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Anonymous03/10/11
shannon says...
Not bad, could use some more sex and fillers. but good, i enjoyed it, as a daughter harboring thoughts....
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Anonymous03/20/12
Excelent story
I just love this one, there is love and only love in it
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Slow down!!
You left yourself enough material for at least two more chapters. Draw it out through the pregnancy when it's his this time. Maybe a chapter when a little girl is growing up.
I thought it was wonderful!
What a wonderful story. It's only right that he get to enjoy her sexually since he helped her and her bastard. Glad to hear he got to knock her up
a few more times. Brilliant mind you have!
shannon says...
Not bad, could use some more sex and fillers. but good, i enjoyed it, as a daughter harboring thoughts....
Excelent story
I just love this one, there is love and only love in it
very good start
it was kinda quick in places, i felt there should have been more seduction.
and of course much more graphic sex.
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