All Comments on 'The bogeyman'

A tale of man made torment chills you worse than the scariest bogeyman.

mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread. :)

Your use of rhyme in this poem adds the contradiction of childlike development mixed into an all too adult realm of experience. You say just enough and I'm glad you chose to say it out loud.

Superbly done expression of horror and innocence.

In keeping with my input to the thread on comments, well done.