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by WomanPariah02/24/08

candid, yet holds back enough

Sensuous, rather than erotic ... and in my books, that's the way to go with "this type" of poetry. Gets me "interested" in what's happening here, if you know what I mean. Truly lovely, creamy, delightful. Thanks for the read.

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by KOLKORE02/25/08

Let's do some poetry...

I love the gentle play on two motives: the senses and opposites. You create a sense of foreplay in the poem. Delicate and sensual.

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