All Comments on 'Kismet or Happenstance? Ch. 01'

I'm very intrigued so far and can't wait to read more.

I'm hooked! Unexpected begininning, deliberately misleading the readers- wonderful! I'm looking forward to more!

August, don't stop. This is wonderful You have a gift for dialog and description. I felt like I was in the bookstore. This has the promise of a great read. More, More, More!

August, don't stop. This is wonderful You have a gift for dialog and description. I felt like I was in the bookstore. This has the promise of a great read. More, More, More!

This was SUCH a great story! I've read it in its entirety more than once--it was just so addictive! I hope you write more soon!!!!! I wish everyone's stories on here were this satisfying to dive into and get lost in while trying to avoid reality every once in awhile. And mentioning the song Ride was a bonus, too! I saw what you meant as soon as I listened to it.

Superb! Excelente! Brava! What a beautiful piece of work, and there are more chapters for me to gorge myself with. I've only read 1 chapter and already I'm loving your writing. Your characters are spot-on, and very likeable. I thought that Nicole was going to be the heroine but you flipped the scene, making it a not so typical meeting.

Oh this is a cute story... I am loving how it is being shaped together - a bit of past, a bit of present and a lot of intrigue :)

Thank you for posting.

I absolutely love how she has his number before she has his number!

Very clever and well done!

Hook thus far, looking forward to more.

There was not enough length to the story, it needs be longer. What happened afterwords?