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Lets See More.
lets see more chapters and Hannah needs to confront her family and tell them that she needs to be with Luke and someone that loves her as a person and not as a Maid and someone to look after her dad when he can take care of himself and the brothers need to look after themselves and there dad.
Atlanta,Ga
FINALLY!!
geeze finally that hard head luke comes to his sense's!! i just hope that hanna doesn't reject him!!! GREAT story!!!
Love It
I love this story and can't wait for more.
Wonderful
The story flows now and you've set the right pace. I will be looking for an update soon.
Brilliant
At last Luke has come to his senses. Pls write more - and fast
Really love this story
I really enjoy reading this story and hope it lasts for quite a while. You are doing great and I am really caring for the family and what happens to them.
So wonderful
This was spectacular. Please update soon!
Can't wait
cant wait for the next chapter. im sitting on pins and needles waiting for it. please post again soon!!!
There's a next chapter, right?
I can't wait to read more! Please don't take too long to submit the next chapter.
MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Please continue writing!! I want to know whats going to happen I have kept checking on this story since March!!
more!!!
please write more i love this story.
aw!
This is such a sweet story! CONTINUE!
Now this is a love story...
Boy, the tension is mounting. Must know more about why Hannah is running away from her brothers and father.
Why?
why do you all do this? start a great story and then dont finish it. it really makes me MAD. are you gonna finish or you just gonna leave it with no ending?
COME ON
pleeeeeease continue writing, I've been waiting FOREVER for the next chapter, it's just so good! I'd watch the way you use your tense though, but other than that, it's great! Just submit the next chapter already, okay?
WOW!! - I just love it !!!
Kimmi_Kis - this is just about the best story I've read on Litterotica - PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!
I don't care about spelling errors, past/present tense etc. - it is just a lovely story.
You MUST clear up why she's running from her family - why she's so hesitant to Luke - please bring it to a romantic finish. - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Again, KEEP WRITING - you are VERY good !!! - Thank you.
WOW!! - I just love it !!!
Kimmi_Kis - this is just about the best story I've read on Litterotica - PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!
I don't care about spelling errors, past/present tense etc. - it is just a lovely story.
You MUST clear up why she's running from her family - why she's so hesitant to Luke - please bring it to a romantic finish. - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Again, KEEP WRITING - you are VERY good !!! - Thank you.
pleeze continue the story
Where's the next installment?
Love these stories. Are you going to finish it?
Please finish
I enjoyed reading this entire story. You have great writing skills. Please finish this story.
Please continue the story it's amazing!?!?
What happens next???????!!!!!!! Please finish the story!
Please finish this story
This story is amazing. please finish it
Looove.
I can easily see nearly a dozen more chapters, at least.
There's SO much potential for this story, and I LOVE it.
I can hardly wait for when you continue it.
Finally
So we've finally reached the romance. The previous chapters were making Luke look more like a sexual predator. Too bad the author looks to have abandoned this story, it was just starting to get good.
What happened?
You had 6 chapters to a great story!!! Then no more. Did she stay with them?
omg
I seriously need more! Like, right now!!!!!! I'm literally shaking I'm so excited and nervous
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