All Comments on 'Watch Me Wank, Sis'

very hot, i need more now.

Before you post again, find a good editor. You have some words properly sequenced, but there's a LOT more to good writing than just sequencing of words.

I don't have a brother, but that was hott!

I hate these 'you' stories. You know... "You pulled my underwear off" or "You licked your lips". Dumb way to write.

get together and watch each, then they MUST help each other, then .....

Just shot my load all over my sisters panties! Thats how hot this stroy was!

Hot ideas!

I wish i caught my sister masturbating over me

made my cock pretty hard to say tha least

Great story , but you need a follow up where the brother and sister get it together. She needs to know what she is missing

It's a fine story, but what about showing off his big stiff dick and his jerking it while his mother watches? Any boy'd love to have his mother watching, dazed, strumming her cunt, while her son whacks off and blows his loaded balls all over the place! Maybe mom'd like to have all her boy's creamy sperm up her own twat?

Recently my brother come to stay at my house for his job. He was going to stay for three months going home on the weekends only. He is 52 and I'm 50. Ive been divorced for 5 years living alone.I havent had sex in over 6 years. Having a man in my house was making me horny. I had just taken my shower getting ready for bed when I walked past my brothers room . I heard a funny noise and opened his door slowly looking in. He was looking at porn on his laptop and jacking off the biggest cock I have ever seen. It looked like it was a foot long and big around as beer bottle . While I was standing there he saw me. He looked at me and shot aload 2 feet high. He said I'm sorry. I walked over and grabbed his monster. It didn't go soft. I dropped my robe showing him my small titties and hairy pussy. He reached up and grabbed me pulling me down on his bed. He started sucking on my tits making me come. Then he went down on me. I know it was wrong but I wanted him. I said please fuck me Steve. He said I've wanted to since you weree a kid Sherry. He rubbed that monster against my wet pussy slowly inserting it. I asked him how big he was . He told me a little over 10 inches. I'v never had more than 6 inches before. He fucked me slowly until it was all in me I couldn't quit cumming it felt soo good. When he had it all in me he picked up the pace giving it to me good . We fucked for about 20 minutes when I started moang POUND ME POUND ME OH GOD OH GOD I NEED IT DONT STOP FUCXKING ME! This must have set him off because he started thrusting harder and SCREAMED AHHHHHH! HE CAME SO HARD I SCREAMED FOR HIM TO GIVE IT TO ME. We sleep in the same bed now and he only goes home every other weekend. He told me his wife dosn't like sex since she went through the change and he only gets it once a month. He gets it whenever he wants it here which is almost every night.I think he fucked my oldest daughter too. Good for him

my sister and i have been lovers since we were teenagers and are now in our 50s and married,we probably fuck about 6 times a year now,it used to be much more frequent,nobody gets hurt and it is still extremely exciting being naked with the person you grew up with,

This is a great story of brother and sister messing around. For me, all forms of family fucking are fabulous--a boy sticking his fine young prick up his mother's mommy-hole, a dad giving it good and hard to his little princess in her cute little twat. But the easiest, maybe most natural, is a big brother slamming his stiff fat prick up his kid sister's sweet little slit. They've grown up together, caught lots of exciting glimpses of what makes them "different" from each other, for each of them seeing the other one is the first time they understood what makes a boy a boy and a girl a girl. What we need now from this talented author, who's around 30 years old, is how big brother gets to introduce his big prick up between his baby sister's legs, showing her that there's something a lot better for her girl-hole than her fingers. When he finally unloads his brotherly balls and shoots her a great big twatful of creamy semen, sis'll never have to use her fingers again.

Get an editor and re-write this rubbish but that's probably a waste of time as it won't improve the story.

Don't ever use present tense in a story. It never works. Stories have already taken place. Don't act like it is a dream. Just tell the story like you were telling it, not just writing.