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by GuiltyPleasure02/28/08

Wow!

No one commented yet. I like the movement here. At first I wasn't sure of your choice of breaks but it actually works. I hadn't seen your work before so now I'm going to look for more.

Tess

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by LeBroz02/29/08

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A feeling of a frenetic beat as if this were being sung {not read} to passionate music! ♫♫

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