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Betrayal and Obsession

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by Anonymous

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Ooooh very good

More more more. Looking forward to more of this story. Jason is a right bastard but I so want to know if he's gonna be able to pull that whole thing off. Betraying his friend like that is cold. Good work, I hope it's not too long until the next one.

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by Anonymous04/02/08

GOOD START

omg i havent been this excited for the next chapter of a story in soooo long

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by SecretFantasy6904/18/08

I'm so excited...

about this story! Great start! I'm hooked already!

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by Avidreader9912/02/09

wow I'm so looking forward

to this saga

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by Avidreader9912/02/09

wow I'm so looking forward

to this saga

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by Anonymous12/02/09

Interesting

Good story idea.

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by Anonymous12/25/09

very similar to a story i read same characters

name etc just they came to conclusion in one chapter and the girl ends with jason confused wounder who copied who?

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by SamiriShreve10/16/12

I like the idea of Jason and Michael bartering for this girl, as if either one should have a say in the matter. And I especially like the idea of Jason getting revenge on Adrienne for being snarky to him. Nice chapter!

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by Anonymous11/24/12

to first comment...

what? Jason was hitting on his friend's girlfriend, that's not snarky, it's loyalty to her boyfriend.

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