All Comments on 'Jan, or Rather John Ch. 2'

Please continue this story with another encounter with David!! This story was sooooo good!

I have SUCH a gender-bending fetish. This pushed that button like you wouldn't believe.

also, MFM threesome. Yeeesss.

Just what every man wants - A manipulative, self centered cunt for a wife. One that demonstrates her total lack of love or respect for her husband. One that ferrets out a fantasy, one that should have remained a fantasy, and then coerces her husband into living it out. With no concern for his health or safety, in the process exposing him to every social disease known to man. This isn't a wife. It's a stone cold bitch. Hopefully there's not a next time for this author, but if there is - get an editor. Phases like "I hope he doesn't see touch much" just don't make the grade. Your dialogue is something a kid would write. Your lack of character develop, compelling writing or even any interesting twists cause me to give you a "1". Only because zero isn't an option. All told this was s disgusting story, on a common theme, that added absolutely nothing to the genre.

I loved this story!

I most loved it because it was not a denigration of the male character!

But instead a portrayal of love between a couple that likes to expirament with different roles!

Perfect so far. part 3 is needed so David can properly breed Connie. Nice to see a couple's fantasies play out with understanding playmates and no real forcing

Loved it,very hot story and well written. Hoping for more