Debbie on Her Knees

Well written!

Great Job! I think that I am gonna have to get past some of my shyness and start to comment more frequently. As Good writers need to know they did a good job. The many good writers posting here makes Literotica the best place on the net for this material! Encouragement has to help it continue to be so.

oh, memories...

My first time was similar. My buddy's girl was drunk and he had her on her knees banging her. I wondered into the room and watched. While her head was down, he pulled out and nodded silently for me to use the hard tool clutched in my hand. I stepped behind her and used her to sate my lust. As far as I know, she never learned of his deceit or that I had spewed my hot cum into her warm, tight twat.

loved it! ty x

good story

well written. a different angle than most. well done.

Nicely written clearly a more polished author

Good read thank you very much. Too often a good story line is made cumbersome through poor prose or wordsmithing, but you accomplished both quite well. Cheers!