by real_life_swingers78
A bit or real life experience and a bit more maturity would probably make a better read. You are to much into fantasy to put much raalism in this story. Thus the erotic feelings and emotions dont come thru. A real life swinger for years.
Really hot that they stayed together and didn't run off into separate rooms... that would have ruined the whole story...good job
Silly, run of the mill fantasy about swinging. People without the ability to handle a real relationship stoop to this.