Will I Learn To Love? Ch. 01

Loved It

Very sweet chapter. Please continue

Yep 75

:-Good Tale, Flows Well, Completely Believable, Characterisation Good, No Bad word-choices, [like roots on the footpaths of life, they are], Zero Typos that I noticed. [which also cause the reader to stumble] Chapter length was good, too
The only negative reading wise was that it took the first paragraph to establish the gender of the narrator, and the author. Your nom de plume didn't help much, sadly.
Look forward to much more from you, in this tale and others

Cheers,
Kilroy

well written

you are very good. I feel like I know your heroine already.

That's an intriguing start, curious!