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Still got it!
A nice story of redeemption and hopefully romance. Nobody write these like you do. looking forward to more.
OK start
Let's see if the finish is OK. Right now I'm anticipating an ending so sweet it will probably be fattening just to read it.
Nice!
It's a fine story so far.I am most interested to see where it goes.
Good story
It was easy reading. Look forward to part #2.
Thank goodness...
another one of your stories. You are one of a handful of authors I immediately click on their stories when they appear and am never disappointed. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Good story as always!
Yet another fine start to a story
You write so well that it is hard to believe
that you just started out a few years ago.
I have always like the old idea that a man's home was
his castle and that you invaded it at your own risk.
The fact that your SO can stab you in the back and you have
no right to react always bothered me. I was suspected that a cheating wife would put me in jail and thought of telling the judge that society was guilty of greater crimes by allowing people their freedom without requiring respect. What would it cost the little lady to tell the guy it is over before-----
And in the case of defending Sherry from the bully I can't understand why he wasn't given a medal. He was, legally, robbed by society.
If it's DG it's got to be good
A depressing start to this story , but it picked up and cheered up at the end. If DG is writing it's got to be good before it ends.
60 year old George
Another great one
This looks like a classic in the making. Can't wait for Chapter 2.
Good Story
Thanks again for a wonderful read. PAPATOAD
As expected....D-G.
I guess that DG stands for "damn good." I really enjoy your stories.
VERY GOOD START!!
One is pretty sure that he'll climb the mountain! Dunno if he should have gotten a medal but had the lady backed his story he sure should NOT have gone to prison for five years. Josh is now a gentleman farmer[His bank account says so]. He should be able to do very well now.
Excellent
Absolutely, excellent!
Good Story
I liked your story a lot.
LOST ANGEL KNOCKING ON SATAN'S DOOR
Hi Chris over here, Sir you killed it what a cool story. I feel lucky that i found out your stuff on the internet.
DG, I think that this man has had bad luck all his life...
And I am hoping that you gave him a lot of good luck in the next chapter.
Great build up -
He suffered - more than one man should -
He is not unique but we all hope he ain't me!
Let's see life treat him a bit better -
Loving it
Very well done. Thanks. Five stars.
Very Nice Story
It really is a very good story, looking forward to reading the rest of it!
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