You Gave Me a Mountain Ch. 02

Even idiots can have what turns out to be a good

life. If you read between the lines this story is full of idiots. It was a good read.

Thanks again

Looking forward to the next part. PAPATOAD

Good Writers

Good writers write good stories, you are one of the best,Thanks!

Looking forward

I look forward to the next chapter as my eyes continue to moisten.A lovely story so far!

Very good

This is more realistic than most. No overendowed fools, huge boobed bimbos, ultra rich jerks, or former SEALS, just everyday country folk. One of the things I like about your stories is the normality of the characters.

Good reading

Which is not surprising! I thought it
was wrapped and would finish with this
chapter. Now you have me worried as there
could be another mountain over the
horizon.

Another Chapter?

Great story, but you have me worried now. Another mountain for that poor bugger?
The character development is superb. Thanks.

Great

i've read this story before. i love it. it also made me tear up. just a little bit. thank you.

DG Hear!

Ch. 3 is the final chapter and has been submitted. Hopefully it will be posted tomorrow. I don't usually reply to the comments in the comment forum, but I do want to thank you all for commenting. I usually answer feedback. For those who have read this story on another sight, Ch.3 has some changes in it. Thank you all again for you mostly kind comments.
With respect
DG Hear

yes

as someone noted you are one of very few writers i automatically read when i see a story submitted.... i liked this one as always great character developement ...maybe a bit mushy at times....but i hope this story does have a happy ending ....this character makes me feel at least sympathetic to him ...as i think we all at times feel as if life has given us to much to handle...to much of that mountain to climb....and as we strive to cope and adjust and have a happy and successful life i hope josh and sherry do also...keep writing ...i only wish i could express myself half as good as you do in your stories. thankx roadbird...

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Great story as always.

A Breath Of Fresh Air - As Usual

You brighten any day you favor us with a credible sometimes mushy story. Your people are acceptably real and act it.

Would that more writers could convey through dialog what most of us are comfortable with. You can be arousing but real - respectful but unintentionally or mistakenly cruel - your characters and you are believable.

A Story Teller from the heart who knows how to send a message and entertain in the process.

Don't ever change ---

With Very High Regard

Great chapter!

Well, he has gotten over a coupla mountains, at least.. I sense there will be another hurdle to pass or he would have asked her to marry him now.. They both sound like great young people.. The kids also sound very well mannered and amiable.. All in all it sounds like it should be a good marriage.. An enjoyable reading.

You Bring Dreams to Reality

Hi Sir Chris over here, this story is an another gem from you.

Life can truly suck - for a long time -

Nice to see a light at the end of the tunnel and have it not be a train - finally -

Loving it

Five stars.

from miserable hero to a pathetic one, well chapter 1 is better than this

DG HEAR

Your writing is great. Been reading up and loving it!

I'm enjoying the story.

I've read this author's work in the Loving Wives section. Good writer who usually develops good stories. Do they have more mountains to climb? Why would a café close at 6 PM?