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Wow =)
I love it so far, as I do all of your stories. Cosimo and Ben are so mysterious, I can't wait to read more about them. However, I noticed that in Chapter 1 of "A Darker Love," the main character's name is Alaina and in Chapter 2, the name changes to Amy. Are they supposed to be the same character? Just thought I'd ask. Other than that, please keep writing!
Love it
Really enjoying this story!! (yeah, I noticed the Alaina/Amy thing... Oh well lol) It doesnt remove anything from the storytelling, thats excellent as always!
Beautiful work
I could see the scene in my mind. It was wonderful.
confused
nice story..but is amy the same as alaina? tnx
Addicting
Addicting, dark and mysterious,sexy...checking everyday for updates..but name change? Is it Alaina or Amy? Is Ben the angel to Cosimos' demon?
Response from author...
Righto, it is Alaina. I'm working on about a dozen different stories here...and things are getting hectic, so sorry for the confusion!
Wonderful read
And definitely a darker kind of love. So mysterious, exciting and dangerous.
Wonderful!
What's that you say? A dozen different stories? Don't tease us Amy! But really, I love your work and can't wait to read more.
Waiting
I love the story so far! Please hurry with the next chapter. I'm dying to read it.
im confused
Im so frickin confused right now. Please hurry with the next Chapter, i am totally lost. Like the story though, waitin on the next chapter.
ok nice but
you changed the name to amy?? huh didn't get that..but it's going alright still.i wanna know what happens next
This is so good!!
I can't wait until you post another chapter. I'm checking back everyday now!
i love this story
i love the story. i cant wait to find out what happens. please hurry with the next chapter!
please, please, please!
I enjoy reading your work, and hope u don't neglect these characters. I'm curious to learn why Cosimo feels his time with Alaina is already limited. She sounds a little bored, living in what sounds like a mausoleum, is her friend headed to the same realm? Plz continue this story line!
would like to know the rest of this story
it's a great way to begin a story but it would be great if you would finish it .. would love to find out what Ben is and what happens to everyone.. hope you add more soon..
More soon??
I like the story and was hoping to see some more on it soon. please up the great work
More!
Great start... Added you to my faves. Can't wait for more!
Wasn't her name Alaina??
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Name Change?
I'm a little confused that Alaina(?) seems to have turned into Amy(?) between chapters 1 and 2. Anyway, just a note, but otherwise enjoying, can't wait to see how this unfolds. I'm a big fan of all your writing!
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