All Comments on 'My Mom's Milk'

but the good stuff all happened too fast once it started happening. Mother should have been more reluctant to make better erotica. Good idea for a story though.

Please describe her hairy armpits and the sweet smell it emitted.

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It needed a little more buildup between the son and mother. Then more descriptive comment on the actual action. Please keep writing. Thanks for the read.

lEAVING 00'S AND Z's after reading a story, anyones story is low.

So get a grip

Amazing story I could feel it as if it had really happened. I don't think the mother should be more reluctant I think everything happens and flows so naturally.I liked the story being short too, all the important things are there. Very erotic!

Marie, thank you for your story. I appreciate your attention to detail. Furthermore, I can't imagine the difficult challenge of submitting a story in a language of another culture. Nevertheless, you have done quite well. Regarding some of the previous comments, try to understand that the readership is primarily male and that many of them are illiterate. Take for example, the gentleman that was only able to repeatedly tap one letter. Another thing you should consider is that many have not been outside their state boundaries, let alone out of the U.S., consequently they have little knowledge of other peoples or their cultures. Notice too that most lack the courage to attach their name. Let me offer a suggestion for future stories. In the future create your male character with a large penis, fourteen to sixteen inches is fine. You see all American men have cocks about this size. Also, your female characters should be chaste, even virginal, but once they see the magnificent manhood that is being offered them, they should submit and even beg to be fucked. This too is in keeping with the way American women. And don't forget, the men in America can fuck for hours. Maria, if you can employ these techniques you are well on your well to earning your first red H. Gayle

This is a fabricated story. I don't believe. Even a Hindu woman can't do it at any cost.