All Comments on 'Horny Experimentation'

by Goldeniangel

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice. Very Natural

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A tad short, (i.e., not long enough to get off), but nice all the same.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!! PLEASE

I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE ON MIA AND ROSANNA. THIS SUBMISSION WAS SHORT BUT I LOVED IT

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Whoa

I loved this!!;) made me feel horny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hey Goldeniangel, I Loved This Story Too.

And "who needs men anyway?" Not me, I haven't any fucking use for men at all!!

Goldeniangel, I just want to thank you for the 12 beautiful lesbian sex stories, that you have written.

I'll check your site here every so often, who knows there might be a 13 or 14..

(lol) lots of licks_Taliea.

Randee1958Randee1958almost 8 years ago
Bold

Now that's what you call a short but SWEET tale of reliving all that pent up tension. And frustration. 5 glorious 🌟's 😍😍😍😍😍

BlueGriffinBlueGriffinabout 5 years ago

These short pieces you write are quite strong. I say that for one reason. You open with the action. The longer stories you write suffer from too much info dump at the beginning.

And that is a common problem a lot of writers have, but your short pieces have great openings. I recommend diving right into the action on your longer work, same as you do here, then after the reader is hooked, give the background and extra information and things like that.

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