that was good, if I were you I would try to get it published as a real book rather than story on internet. I would buy it if it were in paper back or hard cover book.... It was just as good as any book I read from stores.
Terrific story!!! Skip publishing this as a book -- turn this straight into a movie script! Action, excitement, romance, danger, intrigue, and hot loving -- what studio would pass on this?
Oh, and can't wait for the first installment of "The Program" -- bring it on!
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Anonymous11/11/08
The best thing I have ever done
was find this story after all the chapters were posted. I read it in one sitting. I could not have waited. Thanks for writing.
(Okay, so I'm a little late to the party.....like, about three years late.)
Excellent story. Delightful, a few interesting twists, and a beautiful ending.
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Anonymous11/21/11
Thank you
I just read the entire 11 chapters at one sitting. Fantastic story.
I need to go to bed and get a little sleep before work tomorrow, but I had to finish the story first. Nice job. I enjoyed the characters and have to wonder if the mystery man that was unidentified will come back to finish the hit? This story held me completely.
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Anonymous03/04/13
Great story!
Really good, keep writing.
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Anonymous10/05/15
Mystery partner
So who was the mystery partner? Will we ever get to know?
English
Awesome!
Thanks so much for posting this here! I enjoyed it till the end, and for awhile I was afraid you weren't going to post the end!!! So thank you!
great series.
that was good, if I were you I would try to get it published as a real book rather than story on internet. I would buy it if it were in paper back or hard cover book.... It was just as good as any book I read from stores.
greattttttttttt story
wow have been waitin a longgggg time for this.. loved the ending... u r really good... cnt wait for ur nxt series..
Only gave it a "5" because there's no 7!
Terrific story!!! Skip publishing this as a book -- turn this straight into a movie script! Action, excitement, romance, danger, intrigue, and hot loving -- what studio would pass on this?
Oh, and can't wait for the first installment of "The Program" -- bring it on!
The best thing I have ever done
was find this story after all the chapters were posted. I read it in one sitting. I could not have waited. Thanks for writing.
Excellent
After reading it a second time its just as good as I remember.
Kudos for "Forgetting.." and "The Program" too
Hi, I enjoyed both stories now posted. I hope your medical career doesn't squeeze your literary talents into non existence.
-- srgeek --
Indescribable
Absolutely amazing..enough said.
A seriously good read. I'm surprised more people have not read this! One of the best novellas I've read on this site.
Excellent
Everything about it was fantastic. One of the best stories I've read.
Nice Work!
(Okay, so I'm a little late to the party.....like, about three years late.)
Excellent story. Delightful, a few interesting twists, and a beautiful ending.
Thank you
I just read the entire 11 chapters at one sitting. Fantastic story.
I need to go to bed and get a little sleep before work tomorrow, but I had to finish the story first. Nice job. I enjoyed the characters and have to wonder if the mystery man that was unidentified will come back to finish the hit? This story held me completely.
Great story!
Really good, keep writing.
Mystery partner
So who was the mystery partner? Will we ever get to know?
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