ANOTHER GREAT PART TO THIS STORY.MY TEACHER, MY LOVE CH2.
LOVE HOW BOTH OF YOUR PARENTS REACTED TO THIS. JUST LIKE MOST WOULD AT FIRST. BUT NONE THE LESS ITS GETTING MORE EXCITING AND SEXUAL ROLLING ONTO CH 3
I think that some of the comments that the charactors say are a little drawn out...kinda like your trying to hard?...also in the first chapter I think it wouldve been better if it wasnt so redundant...in each comment they pretty much say the same thing over and over...other than those things the story so far is really good! I have gone both AWWWWWW and Oh my goodness!.lol....cant wait to read more!!!
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HER FIRST LOVE
ANOTHER GREAT PART TO THIS STORY.MY TEACHER, MY LOVE CH2.
LOVE HOW BOTH OF YOUR PARENTS REACTED TO THIS. JUST LIKE MOST WOULD AT FIRST. BUT NONE THE LESS ITS GETTING MORE EXCITING AND SEXUAL ROLLING ONTO CH 3
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I think that some of the comments that the charactors say are a little drawn out...kinda like your trying to hard?...also in the first chapter I think it wouldve been better if it wasnt so redundant...in each comment they pretty much say the same thing over and over...other than those things the story so far is really good! I have gone both AWWWWWW and Oh my goodness!.lol....cant wait to read more!!!
Stephany
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