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Carvella Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/09/08

OH,

well fuck the bitch and the horse she rode in on. I hope Linda does not become her sex toy, because that is what she will be know as and soon her daughter will be in the same category. Dear Author: I hope this is not what you think of all Women, because some of them are great to be with and you do not have to submit and obey them. Please stay at home at 9:30 the following day.

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by AnomolousCowherd03/09/08

Not a storybook romance

Personally, I'd rather she chuck an egg at Miss Carvella's window than show up at 9:30, but that would rather put a dent in the story. The story is well written if unbelievable. But this isn't a story to be believed so much as read once and enjoyed for what it is. I'll look forward to the next chapter. Just wish the chapters were longer.

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by Anonymous03/17/08

good story well written

those that write do those that don't complain hope to see this story continued. story is well written and well thought out but would like to see longer chapters

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by Anonymous03/19/08

A great start

I read the other comments...women are like men, each one is different and some do submit and others dominate...nothing to do with sex, everything to do with being human. A great story. Tatiana knows how to analyze others, and when she finds a weak one, she knows how to dominate. Excellent insight and superb character construction...keep up the great work...

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by annie_slick03/19/08

Response to anon from 3.9.08

First of all I think the story is hot, but then I know what is going to happen. xoxoxo.

Secondly it is "fantasy", if I were to write boring relationship building scenarios I would go to sleep. Loosen up, enjoy it honey, it'll make it more fun.

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by Anonymous03/27/08

damnnnnnnnnn

I wanted it all, I can't wait for more, I'll be looking every day for the next episode. Damnnnnnnnnn
linda

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