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by Anonymous

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by Bjorntufuk01/19/12

There are a lot of shitty stories on here that everyone seems to love but this one is a masterpiece, he should get paid to do it.

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by HaddenIndustries03/20/12

bully fucking mom

If you like a bully fucking mom story, you should try this story, here on Literotica:
http://www.literotica.com/s/appetitus-rationi-par eat-ch-01

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by Anonymous06/12/12

Mama needed some hard cock!

The reluctant Mom knew she wanted some nice young cock to suck and fuck her aging pussy. Mama wanted to feel sexy again. Her pussy said Oh YES! She was nasty and kinky for her wet pussy to have and hold cock in her tight ass, her wanton mouth and forced to do it all!

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by Anonymous11/30/12

GOOD STORY

Liked the 2 guys for the most part, & their language, & how they treated the son & the dad.
Would have liked them to make the Mom enjoy hewrself. Perhaps even thank them for what she had been missing.-Eatandberry69

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by Ikay12/11/12

An instant classic but...

This is undeniably an unbelievably hot and perverted tale of home invasion and submission. I think where the story works is in its portrayal of power play between the characters and the sheer ridiculousness of the situation. Despite being a very fascinating, gripping yarn about rape and abuse, it has many grammatical and continuity faults. Anyone notice the mom was stripped twice? Also the ending was kinda rushed and like a commenter said, why rush the actual sex scenes after such lavish descriptions of three blowjobs? Anyhow this story gets top marks for having a truly dark, cynical heart. I don't feel sorry for the family. Their weakness is criminal. Please, Author, write another installment. Or maybe don't if you're heart's not in it. Don't ruin this classic...

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by spyinthesky01/14/13

Strangely addictive.

Strangely addictive. despite all its faults and the ludicrous concept of the whole thing ( I mean why would halloween be required to do what they are doing) I do find I cant stop reading it So clearly the author is doing something right (as the mixed comments here suggest) but shame that skill isn't applied to far better scenarios, themes and structure.

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by buttcheeks77701/18/13

Ass?

I hope there is another one where they plunge up her tight little asshole? It seemed like you were leading to that point.
Nice work!

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by Blindpoo01/21/13

Good job

Great plot, love the idea of the bullies taking their victim's mum. Great fantasy scenario, lost its way a little in places, but otherwise really enjoyable! Chapter 2 ?

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by Anonymous01/30/13

which actress would you love to be in Amy Robertson's (the milf) place?

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by Anonymous02/18/13

@anon Jennifer Connelly?

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by mummiesboy7605/20/14

Probably the best literotica story ever. Hot!!!

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by aroonkumarhot10/27/14

awesome, mind-blowing story

How amazing fucking mom infront of son and dad. Utter most fantasy of all boys mom's taking cock infront of son lovely lovely

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by SplitAces04/16/15

Gave me chills

Wondering how long I could keep Tim and Jeff alive as I tortured them to death.

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by Anonymous08/31/15

Really?

Even a wimp boy could dial 911. I couldn't get past the helplessness of everyone but the bullies! sorry!

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by Anonymous09/15/15

I HAD VERY STRONG VOYEUR-SON IMPULSES AS A YOUNG MAN AS PART OF MY OEDIPUS COMPLEX

This story turned me on.
As to my voyeur-son side, i observed every move of my mom. I paid attention to how she walked, whot she wore, how she interacted with other people...

My mom was a flight attendant (stuardess was the accepted term then) on intercontinental flights. In those days they were real good looking & well dressed. My mom was the sexiest, or so i believed & still believe. Later on she was doing quality control. She was a lot away on business.

My parents entertained a lot with parties every so often, particularly in the cottage in the summer months. I started noticing that some male guests enjoed my mom's company unusually much. She behaved differently when interacting with them. Whereas she flirted with with many men it was obvious that one was special for a while (overall minimum 3 that i noticed). "...mom's fooling around... Is it just in my head, am i imagining? .. my wishful thinking?"
The cottage had a half-finished loft in the attic just above the living room & the kitchen. The hardwood floor of the loft was also the ceiling of the main floor. On a few spots the gaps were big enough to spy! OMG i was not crazy: i saw my mother making out with one the "suspected lovers" in the kitchen while everybody else was outside. She was in her bikini with apron on the front, was bending to take something out of the oven. He was with her in the kitchen. He gently stroked her on her back alongside the spine from the neck down to her ass and then alongside the butt crack. He was wispering something in her ear. She just said, "You are out of your mind... Someone could see us. Be patient."
My heart was pounding so strongly i was afraid they might hear it. I had to control my breathing. I was not mad at my mom at all. I just became so much more infatuated with her. I was glad she is a woman made of flesh AND hot blood, not an angel (in spite of her agelic face).

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Huh?

Probably should have mentioned them cutting the phone line for this to make any sense.

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by Anonymous12/26/15

now that is a hot one!!

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by Anonymous04/06/16

Phones? Only the bully owns one????

Fuck this trash. Suspension of disbelief not happening

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by dculo06/10/16

Alicia Meyers

"Maybe you're so tight..." Jeff said, sticking his hand down her panties and into her cunt. "...because your husband's got such a tiny dick?"

"Holy shit you're tight... your husband really does have a pretty tiny dick, huh?"

I love it when the attackers of the wife/female niyla chastise the husband for having a small/skinny cock hence why she's still so tight. LOVE IT styers!

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by Anonymous08/20/16

Great Story...

... At least it COULD have been. Instead, it was written by a MORON, for the enjoyment of fellow MORONS. Literotica is losing it's edge. There was a time when their stories stood out. Now any idiot with a keyboard can get published, and all too often are. Fortunately there's other sites like Kirsten's where the stories aren't hampered by the need to be relevant! Readers who miss the old days here, should start defecting there. Literotica spends a great deal of time boasting their characters are 18 and over, but give free reign to authors just barely out of junior high. It's hilarious... And discouraging!

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by Anonymous11/04/16

May this...

happen to your wife, mother and daughter if you have them. You should just go kill yourself - preferably by drinking Drano.

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