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There's a sense of foreboding that comes across in this.
I agree with LeBroz
that there's a forboding quality that pervades this piece. I love the second strophe, which is just creepy good. The first strophe (mainly the "options" line) seems too prosey too me, especially when most of the rest of the poem is so tightly constructed. Food for thought maybe.
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poem Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
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Allison Krauss has a song of this nature...Called Ghost in the house and I play
it whenever feel like your poem....the song lets the energy inside out as one feels in touch will the resonance with her sounds...intense words...I enjoyed reading it very much..thanks..bluerains
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