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My husband and I play a version of this. Gentle BDSM we call it. Fantasic. I did notice you switched the female's name a few times, but that did not wreck it for me. You might want to re-submit if you ever have some time. Love it! Please give us more!

Hira

fuck that cum

Mmmmm, just read that without touching myself, although I want to. I'll just have to wait to be told to;)

Would love to see twin sisters with twin masters/husbands and maybe with their father-in-laws of both sisters and husbands. Just a thought.

Oh how yumsome! I do like your style of writing. I can picture it in my head. I wish my daddy was here at the moment to tell me to cum!

I have only one negative thing to say about this short story, its short :)

i enjoyed reading it very much and i am hoping for more.

I apologize for posting anonumously.

I really enjoyed this story - some very sexy moments!

Very hot! Thanks.