Very nicely written! Flowed well, not too fast, and not overdone!
There are not enough of this type of story in this category - very nice story - could have been a little longer. I would enjoy reading more of the same or even another chapter - broadening her sexual knowledge
I really enjoyed this story, and agree with other reader there are not enough of this type of story. I hope you continue with additional chapters. Violetflower
it'll tell you that the proof of a virgin's virginity is at the opening to the vagina and not inside. Beside that, very well done.
I love historical romances so i thoroughly enjoyed this. Very nicely done.
Nice historical romance - but I am less forgiving than an earlier poster - the location of the hymen is - or shouldn't be - a mystery, but it seems that few writers get it
I enjoyed this story very much. Historical Romance...can not beat em. Hope to read more!
Thank you for all the feedback. It's my first submission and I am encouraged to continue the story. It should be available by mid April.
Very nice and good story. And exciting me...
Hi, really enjoyed the story, hot stuff!
I keep returning to this hoping to find a sequel! It's has great potential and never fails to arouse me. Love the historical touch, please continue.
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