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My Teacher, My Love Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/24/09

AT LAST WE ARE TOGETHER AS ONE

GREAT CH3 OF MY TEACHER, MY LOVE.
THIS IS NOW GETTING MORE SEXY WITH BOTH HER PARENTS.
LETTING THEM TO SHARE THERE LOVE IN THE PARENTS HOUSE .
I CAN SEE THEM NEXT BEING LOVERS TOGETHER. IT JUST GETS BETTER.

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by Anonymous09/23/11

this story has potential but

i'm not really feeling how it's written. i feel a little uncomfortable and bored reading this, it feels to stiff, almost like it was written in 3rd person, and i'm not able to really get into the story. the conversations feel like your talking in a circle before you finally say what you mean, causing me to skip through it. i think if you had written this in a more relaxed way i would be enjoying it more. i hope the following parts are better and pull me into this story =)

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