make her and the kids a living. She has a drippy cunt and has to be a slut whore...poor poor her...More like poor poor cukold husband..Why can't wives like these be terminated with extreme prejugiced. Walt should be casterated with a rusty knife. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
Another slut wife/wimp husband story. What is up with these authors? They must be gay or man hating bitches.
by
Anonymous03/10/08
You promised
You said you were going away after your big ben shit stories but here the fuck you are again writing more cockold big dick trash. Oh well, last story of yours I'll glance at.
I think The woma should get a divorce from Dave if she is unhappy with her marriage if Dave is so much into his work and not his marriage then he or she should just get a divorce and also they should start thinking about the family they have .
by
Anonymous03/10/08
women hater
geez, women are inconsederate and selfish whores. grow up!
by
Anonymous03/10/08
Another Wimp Writer Returns To Pollute The Website
What is it these days? This is the third wimp writer who promised to never, never, never ever post here again because people wouldn't fawn over him. Now they're coming back to write more ridiculous BS, and do it atrociously too. Someone told these wimpy cuckold writers they had the talent to write, and should express their psychological inadequacies by writing stories about themselves. What a crock! They were lied to. None of these wimp writers has an ounce of talent and their only embarrassing themselves.
by
Anonymous03/10/08
They all came back to drive you fucking crazy
We love to hear you cry and get pissed off from reading the stroies you fucking love to read while you jurk your little cock. So if you don't like these stories STOP FUCKING READING THEM> If you keep it up your momma will know you love them and your wife will make you a cuckold just like all of us!!! I for one would love to fuck your wife with a 12 inch dildo and I bet she would love it too since you can't be more than 3 inches hard!.
by
Anonymous03/10/08
Problem!
The problem is this doesn't turn most men on.If we thought a story hot enough to jack off we damm sure wouldn't complain. As for your 12" dildo stick it up your ass like you usually do!
My presumption is that this is a fictional tale of a hot slut, whose husband decides to become a work-a-holic, and let his family life suffer. Wife needs some fun, so she finds it, and I like the story so far.
by
Anonymous03/10/08
!
Well the usual question why on earth is this woman still married there is no need for any of this nonsense about her husband working to hard how about in chapter two she tells all her friends and family that she is leaving her husband for his work mate and that he was just working too hard and that no she wasn't a selfish person, oh and the husband gets a great lawyer takes both walt and her to cleaners.
by
Anonymous03/11/08
Damn that husband concentrating on earning a good
living for his wife and her lifestyle. My goodness he could work less, make more, fuck her more, and have her leave him for a richer guy. Put another way, the grass is always greener on the other side of the street, and anyone can rationalize why they have no morals, no ethics, and no real character. Every adulterer has a reason they have been forced to have sex outside of their marriage and betray their spouse and marriage vows. It is one thing to have an agreement and both take physical and medical risk that expose the other. It is another thing to put a mate in harm's way without regard for them. Tells you that no love or loyalty is lost on the one who is married to the slut. Put this story in Texas and have the husband find them in his bed when he comes home early and unexpectly and have him use on rifle slug that passes thru both bodies in their moment of joy. No jury in Texas would convict a man in such a position of a crime of passion. He might get a couple of years of probation if some newbies find their way onto the jury. There is a nice little town just out of Conroe, north of Houston, called Cut and Shoot, the actual name of the town. Want to know what real men think of cheaters, learn the history of the name of that town.
by
Anonymous03/11/08
I held my thoughts until AFTER I've redit it
and now that I've read it, I must say it is just a lame piece of nonsense. I don't really even mind the sex stuff; there was just no story of any interest in it.
by
Anonymous03/11/08
Times A Changing - Wimps R Out
It wasn't necessary to paint the hard working poor bastard as such a small dicked ass kissing wimp so despicable as compared to your namesake in every meaningful way.
You turn people off needlessly in your power trip.
Lesser talented writer need to emphasis the crude but you don't need to.
Grow up and use the talent and time spent if you wish to arouse and not piss semi-normal people off.
That is unless customer appreciation and credibility aren't your real intentions.
by
Anonymous03/11/08
Loved it!
Your a good story teller. This is no exception. I hope you write more chapters.
by
Anonymous03/11/08
Pathetic wimpy critics
I just imagine that the critics of these stories are guys in low level blue color jobs that catch shit off of everybody all day long and this is there only chance to take it out on someone without getting critized or getting the shit beat out of them. They are no more than pathetic little nerds with no reason to live.
by
Anonymous03/15/08
Love the story but I don't get the bad comments!
The author was very clear about the theme of this FICTIONAL story and yet certain readers still criticize him for writing it. If the reader does not like to read about cheating wives or swingers then he or she should find something else to read. There are certainly plenty of choices on this site. I truly believe that this story hits home with some inadequate men and that they are angry with their lives. If stories like this strike a nerve then don't read them it is that simple. Personally I like the story and I hope to read more about Diane.
WOW! Comments are all over the map. Again I apologize if some readers are offended by this topic but I wish they just would not read the story if it is not to their liking. I have received positive e-mails commenting on the story and advising me not to be turned off by the negative comments. I will write more about the fictional character Diane and I request that the readers that are turned off by this theme not read it rather then sabotage the story with negative voting and comments.
by
Anonymous04/02/08
Forget the loser comments it was awesome loved it
Great stuff please do more. The kinkier and more taboo the better.
by
Anonymous02/25/09
I can relate
If this were a true story, Diane, would NEVER have been able to explore
the limits of her sexuality. Why, I wonder, is a woman saddled with the term
WHORE & SLUT when she gets the opportunity to experience her sexuality fully?
Maybe late adolescence. This is a HIGHLY unlikely scenario. Fairly young Hubby executive with a gorgeous Sweetie who gets NO attention. No information about the couple's courtship history or her high school / college social life, but it seems she was highly sheltered and married a non-sexual dork! She is, however, highly sexed and needs servicing. Hubby's colleague and chief promotion rival is a Greek (Sex) God who teaches her ALL about sensuality with unbelievable fortitude and plausible gusto!
Good reading with respect to word mechanics, less with respect to believability.
English
Oh the slut doesn't like her jusband trying to
make her and the kids a living. She has a drippy cunt and has to be a slut whore...poor poor her...More like poor poor cukold husband..Why can't wives like these be terminated with extreme prejugiced. Walt should be casterated with a rusty knife. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
Another one
Another slut wife/wimp husband story. What is up with these authors? They must be gay or man hating bitches.
You promised
You said you were going away after your big ben shit stories but here the fuck you are again writing more cockold big dick trash. Oh well, last story of yours I'll glance at.
Good story of seduction, well told
You actually make Walt a sympathetic character, and Diane's gradual surrender to her desires is very exciting.
Get a Divorce
I think The woma should get a divorce from Dave if she is unhappy with her marriage if Dave is so much into his work and not his marriage then he or she should just get a divorce and also they should start thinking about the family they have .
women hater
geez, women are inconsederate and selfish whores. grow up!
Another Wimp Writer Returns To Pollute The Website
What is it these days? This is the third wimp writer who promised to never, never, never ever post here again because people wouldn't fawn over him. Now they're coming back to write more ridiculous BS, and do it atrociously too. Someone told these wimpy cuckold writers they had the talent to write, and should express their psychological inadequacies by writing stories about themselves. What a crock! They were lied to. None of these wimp writers has an ounce of talent and their only embarrassing themselves.
They all came back to drive you fucking crazy
We love to hear you cry and get pissed off from reading the stroies you fucking love to read while you jurk your little cock. So if you don't like these stories STOP FUCKING READING THEM> If you keep it up your momma will know you love them and your wife will make you a cuckold just like all of us!!! I for one would love to fuck your wife with a 12 inch dildo and I bet she would love it too since you can't be more than 3 inches hard!.
Problem!
The problem is this doesn't turn most men on.If we thought a story hot enough to jack off we damm sure wouldn't complain. As for your 12" dildo stick it up your ass like you usually do!
Fiction is fiction
My presumption is that this is a fictional tale of a hot slut, whose husband decides to become a work-a-holic, and let his family life suffer. Wife needs some fun, so she finds it, and I like the story so far.
!
Well the usual question why on earth is this woman still married there is no need for any of this nonsense about her husband working to hard how about in chapter two she tells all her friends and family that she is leaving her husband for his work mate and that he was just working too hard and that no she wasn't a selfish person, oh and the husband gets a great lawyer takes both walt and her to cleaners.
Damn that husband concentrating on earning a good
living for his wife and her lifestyle. My goodness he could work less, make more, fuck her more, and have her leave him for a richer guy. Put another way, the grass is always greener on the other side of the street, and anyone can rationalize why they have no morals, no ethics, and no real character. Every adulterer has a reason they have been forced to have sex outside of their marriage and betray their spouse and marriage vows. It is one thing to have an agreement and both take physical and medical risk that expose the other. It is another thing to put a mate in harm's way without regard for them. Tells you that no love or loyalty is lost on the one who is married to the slut. Put this story in Texas and have the husband find them in his bed when he comes home early and unexpectly and have him use on rifle slug that passes thru both bodies in their moment of joy. No jury in Texas would convict a man in such a position of a crime of passion. He might get a couple of years of probation if some newbies find their way onto the jury. There is a nice little town just out of Conroe, north of Houston, called Cut and Shoot, the actual name of the town. Want to know what real men think of cheaters, learn the history of the name of that town.
I held my thoughts until AFTER I've redit it
and now that I've read it, I must say it is just a lame piece of nonsense. I don't really even mind the sex stuff; there was just no story of any interest in it.
Times A Changing - Wimps R Out
It wasn't necessary to paint the hard working poor bastard as such a small dicked ass kissing wimp so despicable as compared to your namesake in every meaningful way.
You turn people off needlessly in your power trip.
Lesser talented writer need to emphasis the crude but you don't need to.
Grow up and use the talent and time spent if you wish to arouse and not piss semi-normal people off.
That is unless customer appreciation and credibility aren't your real intentions.
Loved it!
Your a good story teller. This is no exception. I hope you write more chapters.
Pathetic wimpy critics
I just imagine that the critics of these stories are guys in low level blue color jobs that catch shit off of everybody all day long and this is there only chance to take it out on someone without getting critized or getting the shit beat out of them. They are no more than pathetic little nerds with no reason to live.
Love the story but I don't get the bad comments!
The author was very clear about the theme of this FICTIONAL story and yet certain readers still criticize him for writing it. If the reader does not like to read about cheating wives or swingers then he or she should find something else to read. There are certainly plenty of choices on this site. I truly believe that this story hits home with some inadequate men and that they are angry with their lives. If stories like this strike a nerve then don't read them it is that simple. Personally I like the story and I hope to read more about Diane.
Author Feedback!
WOW! Comments are all over the map. Again I apologize if some readers are offended by this topic but I wish they just would not read the story if it is not to their liking. I have received positive e-mails commenting on the story and advising me not to be turned off by the negative comments. I will write more about the fictional character Diane and I request that the readers that are turned off by this theme not read it rather then sabotage the story with negative voting and comments.
Forget the loser comments it was awesome loved it
Great stuff please do more. The kinkier and more taboo the better.
I can relate
If this were a true story, Diane, would NEVER have been able to explore
the limits of her sexuality. Why, I wonder, is a woman saddled with the term
WHORE & SLUT when she gets the opportunity to experience her sexuality fully?
Lynne
Adolescent fantasy
Maybe late adolescence. This is a HIGHLY unlikely scenario. Fairly young Hubby executive with a gorgeous Sweetie who gets NO attention. No information about the couple's courtship history or her high school / college social life, but it seems she was highly sheltered and married a non-sexual dork! She is, however, highly sexed and needs servicing. Hubby's colleague and chief promotion rival is a Greek (Sex) God who teaches her ALL about sensuality with unbelievable fortitude and plausible gusto!
Good reading with respect to word mechanics, less with respect to believability.
3*
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