by CornishBabe
If you're going to write a critical essay you really do need to make a decision as to what your conclusion is, and then use the text to back up what you say. To just leave it dangling like that is a bit of a cop out! The quotations that you do use seem to be somewhat floating - they're not embedded in the main body of writing all that well... To make a convincing argument the key thing is to make sure every point you make is supported with completely relevant quotations and /or situations from the play.