Great story, please continue as you hinted in the last part of the story.
love your story very much!!!
By mindless imbecile !!!!
How Clueless is Randy seriously you expect us to beleive this BS
Writer should take more care in developing his story.
I gave it a 1. First no normal person has a 9 inch cock and the few that do don't function well. Second the story is too implausible.
A decent prose? Bah! 1.
I love this story. Erin reminds me so of someone I know. Oh to meet someone like that again! Keep it up.
Her boy friend Randy seems to be a real nut,who always watch her ass but never felt like fucking her,but still the story of fucking a huge cock outside a committed relationship really gives erotic waves to the readers
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Don't stop there!!! :)
Great story, please continue as you hinted in the last part of the story.
great story!!!
love your story very much!!!
What a SHIT story !!
By mindless imbecile !!!!
Mindless drivel
How Clueless is Randy seriously you expect us to beleive this BS
I agree with the comment below.
Writer should take more care in developing his story.
Stupid story
I gave it a 1. First no normal person has a 9 inch cock and the few that do don't function well. Second the story is too implausible.
What the hell do you expect from black tow animal?
A decent prose? Bah! 1.
Erin ... Incredible
I love this story. Erin reminds me so of someone I know. Oh to meet someone like that again! Keep it up.
Her boy friend Randy seems to be a real nut,who always watch her ass but never felt like fucking her,but still the story of fucking a huge cock outside a committed relationship really gives erotic waves to the readers
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