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by Anonymous03/12/08

Well, nice, but.......

I'm liking the story, but yes, the chapters are a bit short and therefore, it's easy to lose track of where we are in the story. (That's especially true with the longer we wait for the next chapter.) Maybe you could combine two or three of what would be separate chapters, and keep the story moving along. (On the other hand, you may be getting near the end of your planned story line.) It's good work; just a little broken up for easy reading.
-- KK in Texas

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